Becoming A Graphic Designer 2

Print Case Study: Ferdinand V.S.O.P

Web Case Study: Jenie's Dance School

Print Improvement Feedback

As I am very proud with the book jackets of Agatha Christie I designed, I would like to make them perfect. Therefore, below are the feedback I received and plan to change:

• Increase font-weight.
• Increase contrast between text color and background by making it blurry on the inside or adding a fill color with padding on the text.
• Align cover titles on centered-aligned or left-aligned between jackets.
• Bring down content on cover and back cover.
• Remove text to sit on baseline to add space.
• Increase font-size for quotes in the back cover.
• Add fill to text boxes of the inside.

Web Improvement Feedback

I would like to improve the site I did for Park Jean Drapeau. I agree with all the suggestions below and I will soon implement them and much more!

• Remove the hard micro-animations on buttons and images.
• Align everything with the same left margin.
• Font-size on body could be smaller.
• Fix social media icons and buttons (color and size).
• Apply consistency and repetition in background colors from the sections.
• Add more bottom and top space in the header.
• Apply more space when a user clicks a link from the menu and it leads to a section.
• Have more space around the text in Reviews.
• Align left people's names in Reviews.
• Smaller font-size in captions under images.
• Probably make the landing image not so blurry.
• The gallery in About must take the whole space of the screen. The links to those images must be below them, and not on hover.